How to answer business mail more aptly?
I usually begin mail with: Thanks for your reply; how are you; Good day etc.What more could be written in the first line of mail?
It would be really nice if someone edit & re-write the following sentence for me.
We have mentioned some products of our choice; we would like you to suggest us some of your best products which would give optimum result in our environment
It's not really appropriate to put phrases like "how are you?" or "good day"into business letters, as these are more personal greetings.
"We would refer you in particular to the undermentioned products and we should be obliged if you might suggest those of your products which would yield the best results within our environment"
(list the products you want to mention here)
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