Objectives Of Technical Writing

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I am opened to criticism. What do you think of my letter? if you may read on (about Apprenticeship Position)?

This is just part of it, it's not the whole thing yet, do you think I should take out some words or how would you write it?
Thanks for all the answers


I feel that practical hands-on knowledge/experience is just as important as the technical or book learning. Whilst I am enjoying my studies I am aware that I need to complement this knowledge with practical experience gained in the workplace.

So, with this objective in mind I would welcome the opportunity to work once a week, as a volunteer or paid in whichever department or capacity the company wishes in order to develop my skills and to gain more experience of the whole company's operations, and also for the sake of obtaining first hand knowledge.

Im guessing this is your first letter to this company?
I carn't realy give a complete beakdown without seeing it all but.....

It always pays to learn a little about the comany and what it does, try not to be so vaige, in particular;

Don't put in the part about "paid or volenteer in whichever" this seems very vaige and if any company has the choise thay wont pay you.
Find about an area you are interested in and apply for that, if nessesary ask to be considered for other areas as you are "keen to develop your skills on a variety of work related tasks" or something. At the moment you are expecting someone to scour there buisness trying to find something suitable, which they wont!

Would could help is if you included somethings from your cv e.g. personal statement ( i am a keen buisness minded person etc etc.)

p.s. i have a blank CV that i used for my apprenticship tell me if you want a copy

ENG 352 Technical Writing - 15 GOOPS—Goal Objective Outcome Purpose and Success


objectives of technical writing
objectives of technical writing