Could you help me proofread? It's only 3 sentences.?
Ok, here it is. I looked over it, and I thought it was alright as for spelling and grammar. But my technical writing teacher Is really tough on correct punctuation, spelling, word usage, etc. I don't get points for this until I have everything 100% correct. Thanks in advance to anyone that helps:)
"the subject of my paragraph is the Pythagorean theorem. I wrote each sentence so it could appeal to kids aged fourteen to fifteen years old, who don't quite understand what the Pythagorean Theorem is. I used words that most fourteen to fifteen year olds should understand."
"The subject of my paragraph is the Pythagorean theorem. I wrote each sentence so it could appeal to kids aged fourteen to fifteen years old, who don't quite understand what the Pythagorean Theorem is. I used words that most fourteen to fifteen year old kids should understand."
This would be a little bit better but you had it ok the way it was
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