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Saturday, 9 April 2011

Incident Report Writing

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How to write an informative article

1) What to write? What is new?



The term "new" is seemingly easy to define. This is all happening again around us: current events, issues of time, new projects or initiatives. But a newspaper does not publish only the news of the day. It also publishes further analysis, opinions and articles of human interest.



Recognize what will be good news may be more difficult.



The journalist must choose between the flow of information and events that reach him from his community and throughout the world. His usual criteria are: size, ability to move, timeliness and interest. Note that these factors are not necessarily all present simultaneously in each article!



2) "Hard news" or "soft news"? Articles or reports of substance?



Sections of "hard news" (roughly 600 words) are the record of events or incidents lately. They constitute the bulk of the new one from a regular day.



The beginning (first paragraph) summarizes the facts. What happened? Where? When? Who / By whom? Why? This summary should be very short. The rest of the text is there to give details.



Writing must be clear and concise. Above all, it should give readers the information they need. If the federal government yesterday announced a new program of major importance for young people is a good news story for today.



Sections of "soft news" (roughly 600 words) are common characteristic of not being connected to the news immediately. They may be portraits of individuals, profiles of organizations or programs. The primer here may be more literary.



The depth stories (roughly 1500 words) take step back to the new one. They explore a question. Even if they are more distant from the immediate present, they are as important journalism. They can be a good way to explore issues too complex for the telegraphic style of a new topical. Example: a report on homeless youth. A longer text will reflect the complexity of their individual stories.



The depth stories are at the heart of journalism. A good story to give life back to your community, their struggles, their victories and their defeats. A background report chooses an angle (eg black youth back to church) and explored by interviewing the people involved and drawing conclusions from their statements. The author addresses the question of the important time and tells the reader through the comments of people involved.



Recommendation: Do not forget to "balance" your text. Present different views of people on an issue and let the reader choose who to believe. Your personal opinion should not appear. These are quotes from people interviewed who build the report. You are the narrator.



The editorial: An editorial expresses an opinion. The editorial page of a newspaper allows authors to express their own views. All editorials are personal, but they must be of interest to the reader.



3) How to structure your text



News articles ( "hard news" or "soft news") and depth stories all have the same basic structure: an introduction, then the body text.



Introduction
The first or first two paragraphs are among the essential elements of a new text. Journalists call it the beginning (or "lead"). Its function is to summarize the content when it comes to news stories, to hook the reader, when it comes to general news.



In the "hard news", summarizes the primer that follows and answer the best 5 questions traditional journalism (who, what, where, when and why). (Example: "Young homeless expressed on Sherbrooke Street in Montreal, Wednesday afternoon, claiming the mayor emergency housing during the winter." Can you identify the 5 basic questions in this primer?)



In the "soft news", the theme is presented in a less direct and more literary. The author tries to catch the reader's attention as would a novelist. (Example: "There are four years, Simon was sleeping in the streets or under bridges?" Once the reader hooked, the journalist respond to 5 questions in the text, but not necessarily at the very beginning.)



Body text
It incorporates the views of those interviewed, some facts and your own narration that structures the text. Beware though, you have no right to "editorialisation, that is to say to express your own views in any way whatsoever in this type of article.



Remember:



The role of a journalist is to discover and report the different views of people involved in a given situation. Their comments should represent the bulk of the text. The narrative helps to weave it all into a coherent whole. Recommendation: Do not treating one topic per article. There may be a variety of details, but all must be related to the original idea. (Example: if you want to deal with relationships of young blacks with the police, you SHOULD NOT get lost in the biography of a young in particular.)



As journalists, you are the eyes and ears of the reader. The visual details are important to give life to the text (for this, the interviews in person are always preferable to telephone interviews). You must also "feel" about you, that is to say, develop an understanding of the emotional context of the issue involved and the views expressed by those involved.



Agree? Here are two examples that summarize each case essentially to cover.



Young people come together to form an organization. You must say why they do it and what changes they are trying to promote in society. You must also specify who they are and what strategies they plan to use.



An artist is exhibited for the first time. Why? That thinks it's art? His creative process is it rational or emotional? What works like his?



4) Some other tips



How to find ideas



Keep your ears and eyes open, listen to what your friends are talking about.



Read everything that comes to hand, find ideas in other newspapers and magazines.



Discover the views of young people in a matter of time.



Work on a subject that interests you and you would like to learn more.



Talk to people involved in a particular area to see what they attach importance.
How to search for information



Find up articles on the subject.



Tell your friends and associates.



Contact associations and organizations specialized in the field or interested in the issue.



Get a list of people to interview, cover both sides of the story by interviewing people who have different viewpoints on the issue.



Find government statistics and study of old reports and press releases on the subject.
Do's and Don'ts in an Interview



Always be polite.



Explain the basic rules of interviewing people who know how the media. In other words, tell them that everything they say can and will be published. What if they want one or more parts of their statements are not published, they must absolutely you specify.



Save the interview (for a proof if challenged).



Build a relationship of trust with the interviewee.



Start with easy questions, keep the most difficult for last.



Pay attention to body language of the interviewee, if a question is on the defensive, leave to return later.



Never be aggressive.



Keep control of the interview does not allow the interviewee to get lost in long speeches or out of the topic.



Do not, on the other hand, your preconceptions about what it should say color the interview. Always remember that the interviewee knows more than you on the issue.
Organizing Information



Gather your notes, interviews and searches in a single folder.



Read them.



Look for the common theme that emerges.



Select quotes and interesting data.



Expand the focus of your article.



Summarize this axis in two or three sentences.
Writing and editing



Remember that your role is to tell, to shape a story.



Do not be afraid to rewrite and correct.



Write as clearly and concisely as possible.



Adopt a direct style.



Tell a good story.



Give the reader what you think he wants to know.



Ask yourself what is the specific topic of your article.



Read the article aloud, listen carefully to you.
Look for the common theme that emerges.



Select quotes and interesting data.



Expand the focus of your article.



Summarize this axis in two or three sentences.
Writing and editing



Remember that your role is to tell, to shape a story.



Do not be afraid to rewrite and correct.



Write as clearly and concisely as possible.



Adopt a direct style.



Tell a good story.



Give the reader what you think he wants to know.



Ask yourself what is the specific topic of your article.



Read the article aloud, listen carefully to you.


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Saturday, 8 January 2011

Writing For Professionals

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How can I find a writing professional who can be my tutor?

Of course, I will pay for the tutor's tuition. I am looking for a tutor who have a license to teach an academic college writing or a tutor who finished master degree of English.
How can I find? Please advise me.
Is there any a big company to help English essays in the U.S.?


I found a site that has tutors online that are professional teachers and professors. You can even get a short tutoring sesson for free. I attached a link to it under source. You'll have to click on the advertisement and fill out a form to get your free tutoring session. Hopefully, they can help!


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Friday, 26 November 2010

School Report Writing Comment Bank

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Alternative Law Careers: What To Do If You Don't Want To Be A Lawyer

Alternative Law Careers: What to do with your Law Degree if you don't want to be a Lawyer.




For more information and other great articles visit www.LawDegree.me




You took the LSAT and after getting accepted to law school,  worked hard over three years reading, studying, writing and researching.  You spent night after night doing the tremendous preparation necessary study for and pass the bar exam.  After, Juris Doctor in hand, you tried your hand a career as a lawyer.  You worked for the city, the state or you started off at a firm.  Hours after hours of grueling research and late nights writing reports and motions.  Or perhaps you went into private practice.  You advertised, hung your sign, waded into the brutal courtroom litigation process.  You gave it your best shot, but when all is said and done, you just don't think being a lawyer is for you.  So what do you do?  You have a JD but you don't want to be a lawyer!  Don't despair.  You're not alone.  A law degree can be a valuable tool to help you enter into a number of other fields for those that working as an attorney just isn't the right fit.




Tangential Legal Careers




There are many lawyers who while enjoying the theoretical aspects of law simply do not enjoy the mundane aspects such as the paperwork and research involved.  They require different kinds of stimulation and incentive in their career.  One popular career path is in the variety of legal sales oriented jobs.  A tremendous industry exists in support of the legal profession providing data, software and other information and related services to lawyers and law firms.  These companies have a strong need for law-savvy sales associates who can communicate with lawyer clients on their level.




Advantages to working in sales include a bonus and commission structure that can offer substantial financial rewards and all without the tremendous paperwork and research and isolation that typical legal work engenders.  Those who enjoy working with many different people and developing relationships as well as enjoy flexibility in scheduling and often travel also find this career field rewarding.  Some companies even offer the option to work part-time or full-time from home with many sales calls taking place over computer with teleconferencing.  While definitely for the more ‘self-starter' of personalities, a legal sales career can be a very rewarding alternative legal degree track.  For even more ideas of Alternative Legal Careers make sure you visit www.LawDegree.me




Entrepreneurial and Business Pursuits




Many ex-lawyers complain about the stifling atmosphere they encountered at law firms or working in private practice.  While envisioning the fast-paced exciting legal world in such television shows as LA Law or Law and Order while in Law School, when out in the real world they find that reality is far different.  Often, associates spend entire weeks and months without leaving research libraries and the paperwork involved in even the simplest of cases…and the restrictions and legal gymnastics required to settle a case can take all the excitement and gratification that the young lawyer thought was going to be part of their career.  It is no surprise then that many lawyers decide to pursue more entrepreneurial pursuits when leaving their practices.




Luckily, many of the skills and talents you honed as a lawyer can be put to good use in the entrepreneurial world.  Many lawyers start their own businesses, often in fields far askew from the legal profession.  The time management, attention to detail and project management and completion abilities you honed in law can make for great success in the free market.  Pick any interest, hobby or passion and there is guaranteed to be a Juris Doctor holder that has made a successful business of it.




One innovative soul opened a coffee shop where he offered legal advice free on certain days.  Others have opened restaurants, developed online businesses or created innovative ‘green' companies taking advantage of their knowledge of environmental law.  Still others have started non-profit ventures or nature and conservancy companies that were able to use their particular specialties in their prior legal fields.   It is not uncommon for law degree holders to move into investment banking or use their real estate legal skills to work in real estate finance or development.  The added legitimacy of a Juris Doctor degree will help gain credibility in any venture you pursue and can often help convince lending institutions of your reliability when considering new business loans.  The sky really is the limit.




Creative Fields




A third popular alternative law career path popular amongst those with a creative edge are the many novel paths taking advantage of the strong writing and organization skills that were honed in a legal career.  Many television writers and journalists are known to hold JD's.  As well, radio and television journalists with law degrees are prized for a variety of roles from legal commentary to specialty topics such as civil rights, criminal and entertainment law.  Still others use their legal background to work as legal consultants or become writers  on important legal issues.




Another potential path are those professions that harness the networking and deal making aspects of legal work.  Many Hollywood talent agents and managers have law degrees which helps them in their contract work and negotiations.  High end job recruiters and political advisors are often required to hold a legal or comparable degree as part of their credentials to reach the heights of their profession.  Finally, a small but dedicated subset of law degree holders become artists in their own right becoming filmmakers, poets and painters and often drawing from their legal experience to create works that comment or discuss important issues.  Several famous novelists got their start as lawyers, from the famous trial attorney Vincent Bugliosi to the now famous…but unknown as a lawyer, John Grisham.




Obtaining your Juris Doctor is a great accomplishment in itself.  Just because one finds working as an attorney unfulfilling does not mean the work put into obtaining your status as a lawyer is a waste.  This essay merely hints at the possibilities that are available to the law degree holder out in the work place.  I wish you well on your journey and make sure you stop by www.LawDegree.me for more great articles on the legal profession both in and out of the courtroom.


About the Author

With Degrees in Film, Real Estate Finance and Development as well as a PhD in Psychology, Robert Levin writes expert articles covering a broad range of issues. Some of his websites include: www.toptenmba.com and www.MBArankings.me.



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Wednesday, 28 April 2010

Writing Incident Report

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Three Writing Tips To Improve Your Sba 8A Disadvantage Narrative

1. Don't write a report, make it personal - The narrative is a story, not a report.  Many of my college educated clients assume that the more facts and quotes you add, the better the narrative. This is not true.  The narrative is a personal story of incidents of discrimination and harassment that have kept you from reaching your potential.  Keep your narrative in the first person, recounting events in your personal and professional life.

Remember that the social disadvantage narrative is based upon negative experiences, I call this the "lemon story" versus the "lemonade story", so there is no need to add good news to make it appear you have "overcome obstacles".

2. Keep the quotes short - While it is good to include quotes to reinforce and enhance your narrative, keep them short, no more than a couple sentences. Be sure to give basic reference information,but you do not have to prepare a bibliography, again it is your story, not a report.  Do not include more than seven quotes in the total narrative.  Normally my client narratives range from six to ten pages in length.  The quotes should be reinforcing specific issues, for example: If you graduated from a high school with a very high dropout rate or if your community has a very high crime rate.

3. Be specific and detailed about incidents
- When you are describing incidents from your personal or professional life, be as specific as possible.  Be sure to include:
-the month/year of the incident
-the name of your supervisor
-any witnesses to the event
-a summary of the event
-and most important the economic or financial fallout from the event. This is especially important if you do not have court documents to support your claims.  Here is an example:

In 1999, I met with John Smith of Acme ABC Prime Contractors in Houston, Texas to talk about partnering on the upcoming NASA contract. While he was intially interested in speaking with me on the phone, I noticed that in our face-to-face meeting he avoided making any promises to partner with my company. And he kept speaking directly to my assistant, John Jones even though John reminded him that I was the owner of the company.  It was apparent Mr. Smith would rather work directly with a male salesperson than a woman.  Not getting this partnership cost my company approximately $100K per month for five years.  See attached: A notarized statement from John Jones on his description of this failed sales meeting.


About the Author

Karen Miller is The 8a Mentor, helping small business owners successfully prepare their SBA 8a social /economic disadvantage narratives.  Get a free Special Report and save thousands of dollars in SBA 8a preparation at: www.The8aMentor.com



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Saturday, 26 September 2009

Incident Report Writing Format

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How long does it take to write a 3-4 page essay?

It's going to be in MLA format, double spaced, 12 font. I have my topic, the essay is supposed to be about doublespeak and I found a report by the bp oil company referring to their gulf of mexico oil spill as "The Deepwater Horizon Incident" which can be misleading. I can't use any first person words or phrases like "I think" or "you" or "we" etc. I pretty much already have the format of what the essay is supposed to be like in the form of 6 different questions that I won't get into. It is Tuesday, September 28th at 4:40 PM right now and the essay is due this Thursday at 5:45 pm where I'll have to read it to the class and get feeback. How long should this essay take me to write?


5 hours


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Sunday, 30 August 2009

Writing Incident Reports

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Sports Journalism Courses – Writing about Your Team's Glory, Glory Days

Do you enjoy writing? Do you love sports? Then perhaps a sports journalism course may be an ideal way to combine your love and your enjoyment.




How many times have you been to an exciting football match full of goals and controversial incidents and returned home talking and raving about how great the game was, only to read something quite different in the newspaper the next morning? It's almost as if the reporter was at a completely different match, either that or they were so taken by the club's marvellous half time pies, that they didn't make it back to their seat for the second half!




You really believe that you could have written a much better account of the events. Why not take a course in sports writing and prove your point? You know you can talk football, but now you can learn all the other skills needed to see your reports appearing in magazines, newspapers and websites.




The passion and intensity of the Six Nations Championship has held you captivated, there has been plenty of rivalry at the office and the matches at Twickenham, Murryfield and the Millennium Stadium have left you and other fans salivating at some of the rugby on display.




Now it's time to share it with others and describe how the Welsh can really sing, how that scintillating try was scored, how that horrendous injury happened and how your team sat on top of the pile at the end of the tournament!




Andy Murray has reached yet another Grand Slam final and yet again has fallen at the final hurdle. Write about how the Scot is carrying the weight of British tennis on his shoulders and doing a really fine job under the circumstances or take an opposing view that once again, a British tennis star proves to be a great underachiever and never lifts the trophies that are the most coveted!




There has probably never been a more exciting time to write about sport in the UK, with the grandstand event that is the London 2012 Olympics now on the horizon. As British athletes begin to hope and dream, and to pray that they steer clear of injury for the next 12 months, you can write about what it's like to have a sporting event of such magnitude right on your doorstep.




The internet has changed and expanded the journalism market significantly. Not only can you still aim to write for newspapers and magazines but now there are thousands of websites and blogs entirely dedicated to the love of sport and sports news. You can even create your own sports blog, full of your own sports news!




We have only just scraped the tip of the sporting iceberg; there is so much to write about and so many sports celebrities to enthuse over that it really may be the perfect time to enrol in a sports journalism course.


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